P.A Piatt's Cherry Drop

A Book Review

So I was kind of reluctant to read Cherry Drop. See, I had read and reviewed P.A. Piatt’s Redcaps Rising and, while it was a very good book, it was very humorous. I was kind of concerned that Cherry Drop was some kind of weird allusion to a cold medication and that this was going to be some weird, humorous craziness. I mean, I like humor in my Urban Fantasy but well-written Military Science Fiction has this sort of feeling to this that the type of humorous atmosphere in Redcaps Rising is just not conducive to. I wasn’t going to read it. It wasn’t going to happen. Then one of my friends, who I don’t believe has ever read Redcaps Rising, but reads lots of MilSF, said something nice about it. I trust my buddy’s judgment, so I thought I’d try it.

I’m glad I did. Cherry Drop is every bit as well-written as Redcaps Rising, but it doesn’t have that comedic feel. It has the military feel that it needs. I’m extremely happy to report that it works. I felt like I was there with these guys. Now, part of that may very well be that it’s been hotter than the inside of Satan’s armpit here in Michigan, but whatever works. They were in the jungle. I was baking my behind off in a cab in a hot, humid place. It just felt right. I will grant you that there were no crazed aliens trying to eat me, but I can feel comfortable thanking God for small favors there.

The story begins with our hero, one Second Lieutenant Abner Fortis, about to make his first drop into combat IE his Cherry Drop. He’s been sent to lead a short platoon whose last platoon leader is no longer available for duty. His men don’t trust him. His platoon sergeant is a corporal. Yes, you read that right. His troops are kind of cranky...

And they send him on a mission to a planet where he has no way to contact higher. So he’s on his own, with a little help from a non-promotable subordinate and a mess lands in his lap. Granted, this SHOULD have been a milk run but it turns out that it wasn’t. Fortis watches everything drop in the pot when he should have spent his deployment napping and waiting for his ride home to show.

There are a lot of action sequences in Cherry Drop and they are all well done. Piatt has a knack for keeping things moving and unpredictable. Fortis, being a cherry, has a tendency to do the dumb thing every once in awhile but that actually fits. There is a reason so few second lieutenants make it back from their first combat assignment in the real world. The fact remains that Fortis has just enough luck, enough brains and enough support from his NCOs that he makes it through and actually manages to get some stuff right.

The initial enemy Fortis and his troops face is not all that creative or dangerous. I mean, the bugs can kill you but they rely on numbers and ferocity as opposed to tactics and strategy. The troops are missing a key piece of intel on them and they still manage to win some battles before they figure it out.

Fortis’s Marines face a situation that would not be familiar to many United States Marines in that they get hung out on a branch with no help and a jacked up situation. Fortunately for them they, also like real world Marines, manage to bring themselves through somehow. No matter what the odds, they seem to at least keep their integrity intact.

Of course, every Corps has its traditions and the ISMC is no exception. Whether it’s using slang terms (like DINLI, which stands for Do It, Not Like It and is a term I’d actually like to see pass into general usage because it works so well.) or brewing homemade hooch in violation of regulations (which, oddly enough, is called DINLI) the ISMC has things that need to happen and they do. I love that aspect of the story because it’s part of what make the book work. Every military force has its own idiosyncrasies and that is one major part of what makes Cherry Drop work.

The enemy is not who it initially appears to be. This is a good thing, because it makes things more interesting. The reason I never liked Pern (and yes, I know that’s heresy) is because thread sucks as an enemy. It is mindless, falls in sheets and has no real ability to fight smart or use tactics. I can’t deal with that kind of an enemy. After awhile, we see someone new enter the fight, and they have a lot more intelligence and adaptability. Of course, none of that means that their superiors are going to see eye to eye with their decisions or that they’re going to be exceedingly popular with the public afterward, but c’est la vie, right?

I like reading newer MilSF because the tech makes sense. There’s so much that the modern military has that a writer forty years ago could never have imagined that it boggles the mind. Still, when I see troops in a far future story they should be using things like unmanned drones with webcams. It makes no sense if they’re not. Now, maybe I’m wrong and at some point in the future we’ll invent something that’s man portable and works better. I’m not counting on it though, and until a better idea crops up, they need to be there. A lot of really well written older science fiction is missing concepts that your average Joe would come up with now simply because no one had thought of it then. I’m not blaming the authors. I get why it’s not there. I’m just saying that as a fan reading a story now, some things need to be there and Piatt includes them.

All in all, this one’s a keeper. Also, I’m kind of bitter that I didn’t realize that I could nominate it for a Dragon Award until it was too late.

Bottom Line: 4.5 out of 5 Lost Troopers

Cherry Drop: Book One of Abner Fortis, ISMC
P.A. Piatt
Theogony Books, 2021

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Cherry Drop: Book One of Abner Fortis, ISMC